Cosmic Cancer Comments
Is life a kind of cosmic cancer
Invented in the laboratory of an alien planet?
Then why does sheer madness rule the universe?
Why are we always at each other's throats?
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The answer to Why is through man's evolution from ape to man. Maybe, it came too soon.+++10
Yeah, it occurs to me from time to time. There's some kind of mistake in our genetic code. Thanks for commenting.
হে মহান শাব্দিক পণ্ডিত ভালোই হলো শেষতক ভুল শুধরে দিলেন। য় আর ই ও আর উ -র পার্থক্য বুঝে নিলাম বাক্যের পুরুষ ভিন্নতায়। ধন্যবাদ আপনায় দেরিতে হলেও শিখালেন আসল প্রশ্নের উত্তর থেকে সরে গিয়ে যা মুছে দিলেন । আর যেখানে এখনো বাঙলা ভালো পারিনা ইংরেজি লিখব কোত্থেকে! যাক এসব বড়সড় মন্তব্যের জন্য আপনার লিখাটি BD HOT POEMS -এ দেখে ভালো লাগল। ধন্যবাদ।
Each line formulates a question, powerful questions! A great poem.
জনাব আমার ভুলগুলো শুধরে নিতে পারলাম না। মুছেই তো দিলেন সবকিছু। জিজ্ঞাসা আর নয়। বরং যে একখানা মন্তব্য পড়ে আছে তাও মুছে দিলে ভালো হয়।
জনাব, এই সাইট মূলত ইংরেজিতে লেখার জন্য। মতামত জানানোর জন্য কমেন্ট সেকশন। তর্ক করার জন্য নয়। ভুল ধরিয়ে দিয়ে মেসেজ দিয়েছিলাম। আপনি পড়েছিলেন ধরে নিয়ে ডিলেট করেছিলাম। সংক্ষেপে বলছি- চালায় নয় চালাই হবে।কেও নয়, কেউ হবে।
প্রিয় কবি কাব্য শাব্দিক স্পর্শে আপনার কবিতা সৌন্দর্যমণ্ডিত হল। অভিযোগ খানা গেল খোদা আর খোদা পুত্রদের ঘাড়ে! তবে ক্যানো? পৃথিবীতে তো আমরাই থাকি; উনারা থাকেননা! আমরাই আমাদের ইচ্ছে মতো পৃথিবী চালায়; উনারা চালাননা! উনাদের কেও পৃথিবীর শাসক নন; আমরাই সর্বময় কর্তা! আমরা যেভাবে পৃথিবী চালায় সেভাবে পৃথিবী চলে। আমরাই পুঁজিবাদী হই; আবার আমরাই সে পুঁজিবাদ ভাঙার তরে শ্লোগান তুলি। (continue...)
এখানে গড কেবল একটা উপমা। কোন ধর্মের স্রষ্টাকে বুঝানো হয়নি।তাই অভিযোগও কোন ধর্মের স্রষ্টার বিরুদ্ধে নয়। কবিতকে আক্ষরিক অর্থে নেয়া ঠিক নয়। আশা করি বুঝতে পারবেন। তবে আপনি বাংলা ভাষাটা আরেকটু মনোযোগ দিয়ে শিখবেন এই পরামর্শ রইল। ধন্যবাদ।
2. I myself would ask why people choose to do the things they choose- -out of greed? out of desire for power? meanness? I do like your questionings - I wish mankind would be more vehemently asking questions as you did here. Mankind should be much more absorbed in finding answers and repairing now before it is too late- -which it may be too late already. I think it a great poem- vigorous, strong, in-your-face poetry. I like your voice. It is very individual.
1. I never understand why we blame God for what people choose to do. If God took freedom of choice away from mankind and forced people to only choose good, then people would complain that we were merely puppets and probably complain that life is boring being so uniformly good. I myself would ask why people choose to do the things they choose- -out of greed? out of desire for power? meanness?
(cont.) .......in fact, i think my ancestors were working on it just as they were sending me to Earth billions of years ago to begin the experiments here. you have SO MANY QUESTIONS! any answers? or just suppositions? ? HERE: Why then the world is full of scientific psychopaths? ...i would put the is between then and the. i came to this poet's site after he sent me a poem comment, which i'll respond to some other day. welcome, poet, to PoemHunter. bri :)
I greatly appreciate you funny critical comments. Surely, I don’t have any answer for some questions; they are just suppositions. I have inadequate answers for others. Does anybody have adequate answers? I especially thank you for pointing out the grammatical error in the line. It was just an oversight.
(cont.) i enjoy your titular** alliteration and most especially this: corporate killer clowns? ** i meant to 'refer to the TITLE': Cosmic Cancer, ....but i checked the definition of titular and found that that is not one of its meanings. it SHOULD BE! ! ! ! but it is also kind of sexual-sounding, and maybe i'll get in trouble for that reason as well. i think you may be correct about the alien planet lab theory. (cont.)
(cont.) ....it sounds like you doubt the existence of God. i DO. i was raised Christian, but made an 'informed decision' about believing vs. not believing in God and all the 'trappings' when i learned to think for myself. of course there MAY BE a God, or many gods, and i may rot (or burn....or BOTH) in or somewhere else when i die. (continued) ...
Why do they sell poisons in the name of foods? ...........i'll eat 'most' things, as long as they are some sort of ice cream or pizza. see? i'm NOT JUST a one-food consumer! your line touched a funny bone in my body and i had to let out a mild (very) chuckle. i hope no one minded. my mate is all for ORGANICS and Non-GMO. i shall run through the poem again, since it's short, and send it to MyPoemList. ....and comment more. (continued) ...
I’m not dead against GMO, but I dislike insecticides and formalin in my menu. I live in a country where every kind of food is contaminated in every possible way. Thank you for all the friendly comments.
A thought provoking poem. Yes, we have many questions that are left unanswered. Some things to ponder about. A great poem well executed.10
A poignant peace. Wonderful imaginary. The present life of human society has been nicely and touchingly inscribed by you, dear Alam, through question tags. Brilliant poem.10
Dear poet Kumarmani Mahakul, My poem is greatly appreciated by you. Thanks for the valuable comment.
Alam, an imaginative write with great imagery. The world cannot be put right as it is left-handed.+++10
Thanks for your close reading. Perhaps, we are condemned to repeat brutalities.
In every question there’s an answer...interesting poem...10+++
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7/30/2025 4:26:38 AM # 1.0.0
Hasrat hay robaroo na kareN hashr meN mujhe Kitne mere sawal hayN jinka nahin jawab (Mir Taqi Mir) (I wish I shouldn't be presented befor God Many questions I have tat don't have no answers)
Thanks for quoting Mir. He is one of my most favourite poets.