Wednesday, February 13, 2019

Cosmic Bat Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many moons ago at a mountainous site,
near plummeting coast where I once used to dwell,
in a cabin secluded I passed the night,
overtaken with fright as the darkness fell,
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Harley White
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Ratnakar Mandlik 13 February 2019

A brilliantly crafted wonderful poem based on a frightening incident hidden down the memory lane.. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Harley White 13 February 2019

Your response to the poem is truly gratifying for me! Thank you!

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Savita Tyagi 13 February 2019

Fascinating. Connecting the experience with solar system! Both of them so mesmerizing! All life certainly deserves respect. It is just we are so fearful of OTHERS. We have forgotten to be part of all.

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Harley White 13 February 2019

Thank you for reading my poem and commenting. I’m pleased that you enjoyed the various aspects of it! I appreciate your remarks and I agree…

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