Tuesday, March 1, 2011

'Cos You’re Gone Comments

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I feel like a song without the words.
A bird without its wings.
A man without his soul.
A heart without a home.
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Dave Dafes
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Louis Cecile 07 March 2011

Great piece. I nice consistent rhythm to the flow of the poem. Good use of language and similes.

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Wendy Thopliss 05 March 2011

Dave this is a lovely poem, i really enjoyed it. well done.

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Dave Dafes

Dave Dafes

Ughelli, Delta State Nigeria
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