Tuesday, June 3, 2014

Corsairs Of Old Comments

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Cutting lime, squatting on sun whitened sand,
I view the contours of my anchored ship
making mental notes I carefully scan
indigenous tribes as juice swarms round my lips.
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Colleen Courtney 06 June 2014

Love the imagery created from this poem! Felt like I was sitting there next to you on those warm sands and looking up at those clouds with your ship moored nearby! Nicely done Capt'n!

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