Corruption In Serpent's Lips Comments

One word. Awesome explains this one. Great write.

wow, i loved it! it was nice, sweet and dark exactly what i love in poetry! your a GREAT poet Vampire keep writing! ! ~Love Hazel G.E

I love the metaphor and the feelings/visions that this poem evokes. Well written.

very well written. i like the change in vocabulary.

its very beautiful and amazing.

wow thats really amazing very deep

Defenitley a twisted poem. I love it. It really resembles mine. I was really deeply infuriated when i wrote it. You have a great poem here.

Wonderfully written. I like the strong words you use there, a lot of suffering brought into this poem. Lovely work: -)