Corruption Comments

The evils and the devastation occasioned by corruption are aptly portrayed in the poem. Thanks for your immense contribution to the poetry word. Remain enriched.

Very excellent write.I am looking forward for its effacement.

Write comment.very interesting

I have come across this profound poem today, it remains still gorgeous and impressing. An honest poem that contains the truth and nothing but the truth and is still powerfully loaded. Thank you once again for this most important problem in the world. My Blessings always, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin.

Profound poem, You nailed corruption with this poem.10+++

You are one of the social ills In the annals of mankind A leech that preys on the weak The poor and the ignorant.....fantastic beginning. Beautiful poem with intensive imaginary, Thanks again for this poem.

A poem with powerful and justified perspective is being impressively portrayed. I cite...... You destroy the very core And foundation of society A malaise that must have been eradicated In its entirety. I revised this poem for it's intensity.

Hit corruption for six. Be proactive.+++10

You will be effaced Completely By the full force Of the laws of men And of God, the Almighty. Corruption should be countered by all together.

It is very apparent that you feel strongly against corruption. I also have the same feelings. Corruption simply destroys a society or a nation. I wish more and more people raise their voice against corruption.

Sad anout dictatorship..sad meaning behind this poem yet created with beauty.

The very core! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This wonderful poem reminds me Jane Austin's tone! Of course you are another Austin! I appreciate your wonderful power of creativity! God bless you Rose! ..................... (10)

Poets who dare to write and publish are true amazing poets, and that YOU ARE, DEAR ROSE MARIE, I am sure and that must be said here, for poets who do not know how that is in countries where corruption is reigning. I can value that, this is a great heroic poem, dear. Thank you for sharing this very important shout.God's Blessings.

LAST PART: I did not dare to create a poem about that, now with President Jokowi, I did that fir the first time and my poem was published in a famous Journal where everyone in the world can read that. Since that was published in SpillWords, hereafter I posted that on FaceBook. I felt very happy, you bet. A TEN Vote.and more for you.

SECOND PART Not only in yours, that in my Indonesian Society too, noiw I am residing in the NL, but now Indonesia has an honest president Mr. Ir. JOKOWI, honest to the bones. He is a greatest Blessing for Indonesia. When all the other corrupted presidents were reigning,

Number ONE: A fascinating read, fantastically worded, you are absolutely true, .....and of God The Almighty, sure.Honesty is the BEST Policy, I reckon. Thank you for this Greatest problem In Society.

You are right dear Rose that corruption is a leech that preys on the weak, the poor and the ignorant. It should be effaced from the society. You have nicely inscribed......... You will be effaced Completely By the full force Of the laws of men And of God, the Almighty. Thanks for sharing this aware poem.10

A tragic and stark-naked Truth that is in our country today