Corruption Comments

corruption will always remain, just like any other evil; we can only keep struggling...

WHAT A POEM IT IS! THE POEM IS VERY CONTEMPORARY AND USEFUL IN OUR SOCIETY, SO THE POEM DESERVES 100/100.

Great poem you have written. We can't eradicate corruption by the change of the system unless it is top priority for the governments. No one can safely predict the nature of the new system. It is us who can exterminate corruption by strong will power and our faith in Allah. A fine 10.....

Mohammad perhaps system will never change... but its our efforts like u have written this poem which can spread awareness and hopes that corruption will one day end.... nicely written

Every lil things especially the beautiful and good things always come in pair, faith or unfaithful, true or untrue, good or bad...because the good always threat with evil eyes, so be ware when you look one side dont forget to define the other side...Life is beautiful, yet it also comes in pair, good or bad, sad or happy....It is soft reminder for us, what you writing or what you observing..good to share mind Mohammad..Thanks for sharing, keep it up_Unwritten Soul

Interesting..Liked the comparison..the poem ended too soon though.. was looking for some more lines perhaps..

Nice Mohammad! However, I don't believe the 'system' will ever change. Beautiful women will always intrigues us! I guess somehow, we're just corrupted ha? ?

Friend, how nicely you are saying about corruption. This menace should end! Nice work.