Corruption -2 Comments

To be able to so aptly sum up corruption in just 6 short lines is an admirable feat. Great work, Rose Marie!

2 Brilliant words in this great poem that should be by all read.

Never better said. Corruption brings the poison that destroys all countries and keeps them from getting ahead! Briulliant

Wonder poem, must be read by all.My regards Mam.

Corruption is not good

Fantastic write. Thank u. anjandev roy.

True. Well written. Thank u, dear poetess.anjandev roy.

A brilliant poem on corruption! Beautifully penned! My pleasure revisiting this insightful piece of work again! Stay always happy and blessed!

Corruption, a constant disgrace for the inhabitants of the country involved. The result of presidents who finally become dictators, they have misused the people´s trust. Thank you so much for sharing this still most important laden problem in a non democratic country. A 10 Full Score.

A fitting analogy of corruption, it is a stain that seeps into the roots of a nation and corrupts its very citizens of its immortality. A fitting work, so much of the worlds leaders from democratic electorates have become no better then despots. The corruption continues, the closing lines are so fitting, if we let that stain continue we soil ourselves. Excellent Poem Rose Marie!

A very good poem on corruption.

Corruption is an ugly and indelible stain// beautiful introduction of corruption

Like a dark cloud that threatens..yes, I absolutely agree with you! Well penned......................10

Yes, that's exactly what it is! Good one

Corruption sinks everything down! ! ! Deep down! Destroying righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Well said, and corruption has greed at the root.

Corruption is so rampant in the modern world in every walk of life! That is a fast spreading epidemic, obstructing the world's onward progress! Unfortunately it is not confined to any particular group! It has infested everyone from top to bottom, especially the ruling class! Like a dark cloud shadowing the sky, corruption is defacing the entire mankind! Great comparison!

Corruption, sad to say, has been in man's mind since time immemorial. Human is selfish and has excessive desire for more of something than is needed. His deeds are motivated by naked ambition and greed. A powerful write, dear Ate Rose........A full 10+++++

We see corruption full on in this well formed poem.

The sky's calmness And envelopes the face Of humanity with disgrace.