Corrupt Clergy Comments

rebellious and challenging ideals.... a threat to entrenched and ossified ways of thought......will surely lead to trouble in any sphere of human endeavor.... the poison chalice is eager to the lip... yes, ....the upper case.....! ***

You seem not to like your teachers too much. I like this, if you like abstract poetry there are many poets who write this way, the imagist school, or poets who reject traditional syntax, or the many poets who write haikus and mostly reject standard grammar, so you are not alone. Just one small point, I`m not too sure why so much is written here in the upper case, but that`s just my personal opinion. Good poem.