Saturday, June 4, 2005

Corrosion Comments

Rating: ★5.0

In pools of liquid acid blues
my essence slowly drowns.
Immersed in stinging words of truth,
corrosive hurt compounds.
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Jo Lynn Ehnes
Elements hopeless Emptiness
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Uriah Hamilton 04 June 2005

A poem that really does completely work!

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Andrew Konisberg 04 June 2005

I absolutely loved this, Jo. Such a fresh deployment of language, perfectly punctuated...it is consistently strong. So very deftly crafted.10/10.

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Jo Lynn Ehnes

Jo Lynn Ehnes

Alliance, Nebraska
Jo Lynn Ehnes
Jo Lynn Ehnes
Alliance, Nebraska
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