Thursday, June 4, 2009

Corrode Comments

Rating: ★5.0

From the channels of pathways, washed away
Sometimes, one may often find pieces of a distant day
To wonder of what may have happened, to one gone astray
Life in punishment, monitored and controlled, cost of freedom to pay
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Deborah Cromer
Feelings Punishment trapped answers Rhyme
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Frank Lambert 18 August 2009

Hi Deborah, you've got some great lines in this one. Silence is indeed the sound and mime the dance to some. Frank

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
Deborah Cromer
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Portland, Oregon
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