Saturday, September 12, 2020

Corridor Of Silence Comments

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Yury Emelianenko
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Dr Antony Theodore 28 September 2020

I 'm 80, though I 'm a master. Don't be surprised when you hear my age. My ears and mouth still work like they did In high school. Plus, I 'm the only one who can read. a very fine poem. love, Do not wait, Do not expect. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 27 September 2020

Cynicism let loose in poetry. But, as a poem, it's good.

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 September 2020

beautiful poem penned on the alone psychology; sometimes the loneliness comes as the blessings if there the alone one lives with full of self satisfaction, sometimes the change comes as the full of happiness if there the changed one knows him/herself fully and can adopt any situation naturally otherwise it will the unhappiness of heII.......deserves 5****

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Mahtab Bangalee 27 September 2020

Ask how long I've been free. What time we need to hurry. With time running out. Want a little more. Don't be late.......changing comes by naturally, if it's not by that then there happens something good or bad; as lonely in the corridor the changed heart never feel good if it lives alone; whatever the world is our we need to change ourselves by inside into good.....well feelings crafted on the corridor of silence....

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 September 2020

Different paths of life! ! Growing up; Going through many things. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jazib Kamalvi 16 September 2020

Write comment. Such a beautiful start, Yury E. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Yury Emelianenko

Yury Emelianenko

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