Correlation Comments

Well, you like Sparrow, I like Chopin- Beautiful poem; enjoyed reading it. I like this, the most: ''moons rays, skin effulgent, disrobed in the water.''- It is interesting, beautiful and scares me, at the same time.

Nice imagery we are always moved and doubts are removed moon has remained our lovable object for each and every enjoyable act

This piece draws me to deep memories of a simpler time of skinny dipping in the moonlight with my best friends sister. I grin and blush.

Rachel, I liked the form, flow and content of this poem, much appreciated.