Correction Room Comments

A brilliant write bringing the ugly to the page vividly for all to see. I call this a tell it like it is poem.....

Very touching indeed and the very truth spelt out in a poignant way......we are living in a morally bankrupt world where we can't hope of sustaining life any more if this way things go.....10

True..! ! .Always innocent people becomes victim only the Innocent one! ! !

Often our childrens are used as fodders in a war in which they have nothing to do. This is also against the tenents of humanity. Nice write.

politrics that degrade the society...terrorrisom that grews as a Nuisance...nice work

Many are forced to become suicide bombers under threat and often driven by poverty! The sad tale of this boy is heart rending! A poignant write!

This is the story telling how a teen aged boy becomes a terrorist. A nice work...................10