Correction And Acceptance Comments

Draft poem for correction in matching style and meter etc.

Wise and beautiful, too.

I can relate to the poem... Accept... hahaha... kidding, . anyway... I like the poem very much... Very true... A wake-up call to what people take as insults but in reality there just helpful corrections for life... Keep writing...

'And at times it's delivered In wrong different ways Just keep in mind It's not what it portrays' Truthweaver Lorena, congratulations! Keep on writing! ^_^

I know this one... =) great poem... you really stated what you felt... =)

This is so true and yet there are those that take being corrected as an insult. I feel if someone takes the time to correct me, they are actually concerned that I may look like a fool if I don't watch what I say in the future, but, even though I may edit and re-edit a story I will never edit and correct my poetry because like you said 'this is the way I feel.' And that is so true too, because poetry is the song of the soul, not of form and rules. This is very well written and thought out. A 10+++++ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara