Friday, July 31, 2015

Correction - A Necessary Step. Comments

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I hit a stone
and you asked me
if I did so,
I replied yes.
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Jacson Gelato
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Kelly Kurt 02 August 2015

Admitting a mistake is the first step to correcting it

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Jacson Gelato 04 August 2015

Thanks Kelly. Your poems are so amusing.

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Allotey Abossey 31 July 2015

Nice work, very interesting and witty. I love it

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Jacson Gelato 01 August 2015

I like your poems too. They are so visual and vivid. However, you can try to reduce the darkness of pain in your expression as it evokes sentimentalism in the readers mind.

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