Correct Or Incorrect? (4) Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Correct Or Incorrect? (4)

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Correct Or Incorrect? (4)
Meeting with the Lord your God

One day, I met God,
the God we all know, near the olive tree neighbourhood,
somewhere near the west of Eden.

God asked me: are you alone, child?
I nodded and God smiled at me,
what a wonderful feeling at that moment, indescribable!

The greatest Blessing I got that morn,
Believing in God is never forlorn, hey!
It made my day!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poet's Note: Today something happened to me, I have not the ability to explain this in simple words, A greatest problem for me to must explain this, Just not possible, but I wll pray for you all included for PoemHunter and the rest, all the best! What about AllPoetry? My good and close-friend Captain Cur is there too, since he quarrelled with PH and left the poemsite, eversince. Captain Cur is doing amazingly at AllPoetry. Good for him, he enjoys each day the correct Poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 15 March 2023

Beyond #'S and words! ........++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 15 March 2023

This is ever so Beautiful! .. And Inspiring! .. Beyond what words can say! .. Awesome! ..

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Richard Wlodarski 07 March 2023

Sylvia, God smiles upon us every day...reassuring us that all is well. And if it's not...we must shed those tears of pain and turn them to tears of joy! Then, we shall once again see God smiling.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 07 March 2023

Now I get it. Many have left PH. I have an account in All poetry. But Somehow I love PH. Not able to explain why

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Richard Wlodarski 07 March 2023

Kesav, I totally understand where you are coming from!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 March 2023

We are on the same boat, dear Kesav! Now you know the answer.

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 06 March 2023

We are never alone. God is always on our side.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 March 2023

YOU are absolutely right

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 March 2023

YOU are a greatest Blessing in my life on PH dear Kesav, I have your opinion either, so strange

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