Correct Me If I Am Wrong. Comments

Yes my friend, I totally agree with you, 'Money can buy you goods and commodities not love and peace'. An excellent poem...appreciated!

An excellent poem to be pondered about.

The repeating lines in each stanza make this poem called an Anaphora, powerful poem is here presented Top Score!

Very well written. Thought provoking piece! I second your thoughts.

Hi dear poet Asim Nehal, you have corrected yourself. For, it is wrong to say, "Money is the root cause of all evils". It is HUMAN GREED. good work. Top score

A well thought out and powerful poem so brilliantly expressed. Liked the recurring lines in each stanza. They made the poem more powerful.

.....be reasonable, apply head and heart......brilliantly penned....enjoyed it throughout....thank u...

You aren't wrong for Another brilliant poem

Making money the purpose of your existence will always lead to trouble. I think credit cards has taken over as the problem, and the banks who issue the true evil of society. Great poem Asim.

Excellent write....but what is the other way to be without money or just enough money in the present world with every day price hike.....a thought provoking write