Sunday, September 4, 2005

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As you're walkin' down the street
dreaming of a better day
please look down, close to your feet
floats a shadow, and it may
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Pradeep Dhavakumar 05 September 2005

Beautiful Poem Herbert. 'No pockets in your final gown' is an excellent ending. One of you better poems. Well written. Thank you.

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Allan James Saywell 05 September 2005

Herbert i think you have found another way of looking at death and i thought i had covered it all i personly i am going to be disappointed if there is no pockets in the white gowns, as i do like to scratch myself without the common herd watching you are having a productive period of writing Warm regards allan

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