Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Cornerstones Of Existence Comments

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Rushing and capturing good feelings coming into being,
writing them explicitly into poetry.

Tapping out their beats musically without stopping or
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 10 February 2015

This individual poem could be the Preface of your collected poems over the past eighteen + months I've been reading. It would provide a prospective reader in depth with a framework in which to place the poems. And the larger purpose is well expressed in stanza 5 beginning FULFILLING AN ENERGY OF MANKIND. Your new reader will quickly grasp the significance of your use of the word INTERIOR to refer to what in this poem is called Introspection. There is also a visual image STAIRWELLS OF EVER-INCREASING WISDOM; it could also be a tower or a mountain; this is the parallel image of the mind, not the depths you enter toward interiority, but rather an elevation you climb up for a look outward, a vista.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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