Sunday, January 26, 2014

Corner Stone Comments

Rating: 2.5

Pressed up to a cold radiator,
The curtains drawn over the day
Brushing his back
And erasing the golden gloat,
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Jazib Kamalvi 26 October 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Sandy. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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V P Mahur 24 March 2014

Dear Sandy, This poem is grave in feelings. Nice work. Keep it up. Thanks! ................................ 'Destination Of Love' ................................ Please Reply.

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Aria Siren 06 February 2014

I've probably told you before but I have a thing for endings. I love when the ending of a song, a movie, a book, a poem, leaves me with some fragment of what I just experianced and sticks with me. This ending is quite amazing and because of it, I've revisted this poem several times. Also really liked the part about the skeleton falling out of the closet. Clever as always. Cheers

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