Wednesday, October 1, 2008

Cordial Shelter... Comments

Rating: 4.9

I walked on this road
Without a worrying end
Three years long phase
I sensed a cordial shelter
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Richa Dhodi
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Anthony Edmond John 12 November 2008

Hello Richa, I appreciate these Salient Lines of Urs...Cheers. The Sage.. Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

'Now I sense a fearful site Where his sheltered ropes has turned loose not tight…' A nice piece.

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Kesav Easwaran 08 October 2008

a very good write on sincere feels...but believe my words...as long as he needs you more, what of loosening of ropes there to fear? impressive talking poem piece 10

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Dr Kamran Haider 07 October 2008

Naïve thought but well said…

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 October 2008

It seems there is no end to this kind of problem to young women....another good piece on this subject...............9

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 October 2008

It seems there is no end to this kind of problem to young women....another good piece on this subject...............9

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Tom Balch 05 October 2008

A really lovely piece, well written 10 form Tom

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Trinity K 04 October 2008

let go is the strongest sign of love...............! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! a love will go nowhere...! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Ency Bearis 01 October 2008

a deep toughts..finally freedom was given...nice concepts.. Ency Bearis

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