Thursday, September 6, 2018

Copy Cat, Copy Cat Comments

Rating: 4.8

Perform as I do, like a puppet on a string,
Wear the same I wear, sing the same songs I sing,
Reach for the same stars and smile with the moon,
It all wears thin quickly, you'll feel it real soon.
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Sarah Persson
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Ashika Murali Acharya 06 September 2018

Wonderful poem...loved every line of this.... expression of freedom in a different way!

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Sarah Persson 06 September 2018

Thanks Ashika for your comments. I'm pleased you enjoyed it.

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Captain Cur 06 September 2018

Keep moving forward and leave all the rest behind. Great message, loved the ending!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 September 2018

A beautiful poem! Liked the penultimate stanza most Loved reading this fabulous piece of work........................10

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Sarah Persson

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