Monday, November 26, 2018

Copulation With Creation (Surrealist Poem) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fountain pens rosy-gold, burgundy, golden-silver,
filled with poetic ink: eager to ejaculate on to the page
in a synchronised orgasm of emotions and opulence…
The Oxford Thesaurus with its aromatic cocktail of words,
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M Asim Nehal 05 December 2018

Read again and i quote A new egg flourishing with life—the embryonic poem is floating free in the amniotic fluid of poetry, waiting to be born in the refinement of existence and transcendence... the blood of stars luminescent in creation; the fire of sun burning the impossibility with its ascendance in creativity:

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M Asim Nehal 28 November 2018

Oh my God! What a poem, Mind Blowing, this has to be one of the best surrealist to date (out of many that I have read so far) Beyond rating, straight to my favourite list.

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Thomas Kane 26 November 2018

Very nice, I have been wanting to do a poem similar to the theme here, but yours went so deep. A beautiful poem...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2018

Gold-rosy and silver fountain opens amazingly. About the Big Bang of multitudes of possibilities of expansion we hear. An amazing poem is very wisely penned....10

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