Monday, September 15, 2008

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She needed to sleep, sleep for a little,
to see him, feel him, hear him say.
Come lovely, come and rest your
head on my pillow, She had to rest,
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Elena Toledo
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Adeline Foster 15 April 2011

I agree with Sue below. Who would associate pain with veins? And yet it fit well. The real feeling in this makes it more than just another 'love lost' poem. Adeline

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