Squirrel brushes corn
From my feeder to the ground
Young deer picks it up
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A moment frozen in time with a few words so eloquently penned.bravo
This silent cooperation reflects the cycle of life as well.
Fine rendering of one of my favorite styles of poetry. Haiku are deceptively simple, but are very hard to compose in the English language. I love the way this one describes the whole cycle of life in three lines. Nice work. I also like your haiku about camping and it's touch of humor about how it having been so long since you went camping and the implications thereof.
squirrel is the deer's cook is it