It's heavily raining
The sun is not reigning
Lost memories regaining
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Contrasts and paradoxes everywhere and that is the order of nature. Poor man is destined to go through all these phenomena with subjective experiences and emotions. To me it is a good philosophical poem.
Lonleiness and bitterness in life can lead someone to strong poerty skills as well as person's with wide genrosity, I feel in it;
The abrupt changes in Nature of the seasons and of the day beautifully caught in poetic imagination! Lovely triplets! (10)
Thank you Valsa Geopge for the supporting comments
Dear Nair, it is really a fantastic inscription from your pen. Wonderful imaginary. Amusing expression I cite..... The sun is setting / The moon is rising / Moonlight warming... Thanks for sharing.10
Thank you Kumaramaniji. Youe comments always encourage me
Thank you Sid. You will be able to write better poems once
A good triplet with many emotions being conveyed.
Thank you Devifor the good comments