Friday, November 30, 2018

Cooling And Warming - Triplets Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's heavily raining
The sun is not reigning
Lost memories regaining
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
COMMENTS
Devi Krishnakumar 22 December 2018

A good triplet with many emotions being conveyed.

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Thank you Devifor the good comments

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Ramadas 13 December 2018

Contrasts and paradoxes everywhere and that is the order of nature. Poor man is destined to go through all these phenomena with subjective experiences and emotions. To me it is a good philosophical poem.

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(DPN) 14 December 2018

Thank you Ramadas for the encouraging comments

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Jayachandran C Nair; 10 December 2018

Lonleiness and bitterness in life can lead someone to strong poerty skills as well as person's with wide genrosity, I feel in it;

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Valsa George 03 December 2018

The abrupt changes in Nature of the seasons and of the day beautifully caught in poetic imagination! Lovely triplets! (10)

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Thank you Valsa Geopge for the supporting comments

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 December 2018

Dear Nair, it is really a fantastic inscription from your pen. Wonderful imaginary. Amusing expression I cite..... The sun is setting / The moon is rising / Moonlight warming... Thanks for sharing.10

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Thank you Kumaramaniji. Youe comments always encourage me

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Sid Nair 02 December 2018

Incredible versus. I wish I could write poems like you!

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Thank you Sid. You will be able to write better poems once

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