a cool moon today I see
though a lonesome view she is
alone she is not
accompanying me along the way
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Well written, Anna. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day!
Seeing the moon as a companion - so close yet so far - is an incredible metaphor. A beautiful poem that touches the core of the readers' heart. Thank you for penning down such wonderful lines..
The moon is personified as a companion to a lonely traveler who does not feel alone anymore, I like the style employed here awesome.
Here we see the poet's love for nature which does not digest the idea of moon going lonesome or him deprived of the company of moon. Pleased to read it. Thanks.
I am certainly impressed and wondering where you have gone. Such an incredibly refreshing and soul-familiar style of writing you have.... I love this....
I like clarity and this piece has that. Though it is not a satisfaction to experience a lonely moon. It was pleasant to hear someone describe one. GW62
Very nice. A moon is a better companion at night. Liked it.