Sunday, October 14, 2007

Cool Moon Traveling Comments

Rating: 3.1

a cool moon today I see
though a lonesome view she is
alone she is not
accompanying me along the way
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Anna Pacheco
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Anil Kumar Panda 01 December 2015

Very nice. A moon is a better companion at night. Liked it.

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Kim Barney 01 December 2015

Well written, Anna. Congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day!

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Driss Ezzireg 01 December 2015

Nice poem.Elements of nature are always a comfort.

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John Richter 01 December 2015

So happy to read this again Anna....

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M Asim Nehal 01 December 2015

Great metaphor and nice imagery in your poem....

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Edward Kofi Louis 01 December 2015

A companion is needed in life. Nice work.

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Souren Mondal 01 December 2015

Seeing the moon as a companion - so close yet so far - is an incredible metaphor. A beautiful poem that touches the core of the readers' heart. Thank you for penning down such wonderful lines..

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Kinyua Karanja 01 December 2015

The moon is personified as a companion to a lonely traveler who does not feel alone anymore, I like the style employed here awesome.

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Rajnish Manga 01 December 2015

Here we see the poet's love for nature which does not digest the idea of moon going lonesome or him deprived of the company of moon. Pleased to read it. Thanks.

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John Richter 13 August 2015

I am certainly impressed and wondering where you have gone. Such an incredibly refreshing and soul-familiar style of writing you have.... I love this....

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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

I like clarity and this piece has that. Though it is not a satisfaction to experience a lonely moon. It was pleasant to hear someone describe one. GW62

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