Sunday, July 21, 2019

Cool Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cool down sweetheart cool down to be liquefied,
Cool down further, a little more, to be solidified,
Friendly clouds arisen, love rains will fertile the soil,
Within heart is hidden a dormant sleeping turmoil,
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Khalid Saifullah 19 September 2019

We have been suffering from a hot fever of hate and need to be cool down.

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Savita Tyagi 28 July 2019

Above we may be suffocated by the fumes of gunpowder, Below are the common roots to spring a friendship flower.... Thank you Akhtarji for this lovely. poem. It really catches the thought of my poem so beautifully. Thank you so much for reading and commenting on the poem. It is an added pleasure to read this excellent poem of your.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 July 2019

YOUR POETRY HAS COOLED SO MANY NOW FEWER READ ME AS YOU RUN FAR AWAY SINCE THOSE WARMER HOT DAYS NOW COOL DOWN YOU SAY I WAS ONCE LOVED BY SO MANY ASK ANY AND NOW DO BE KIND AND SAY ABIDE WITH ME COOL DOWN YOU MAY BUT BE HAPPP JA JI

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 July 2019

A poem of great depth. Hate will never reign. Roots always bring a flower of friendship to prevent hate lurking in the heart. Wonderful write imbued with wisdom and insight. A great message to humanity.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 July 2019

the roots yeah the underlying roots inter connected soothe for the friendship!

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