if I had to cooking for you
first I have to think of you
and make you special to me
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heart so tight .........this is really 'nice'. that the shrimp, will be cremated ..........if this means what i think it means [and i plan to spend more time on this poem another day, giving 'helpful suggestions' as i am wont to do for some, sometimes], i REALLY like it. [ i NEVER use the word wont! ] Poetheart M., i am not familiar with 'having coke with you' and i probably won't bother checking on it. but i am grateful to F.O. for the inspiration given to you. as always, the english is a bit rough in spots..............so what? but i may give you some advice later, as i already said. ALSO, as always (i think) i have enjoyed your style here VERY much. it is kind of like watching a movie unfold, nicely. [there i go with nice again; well, i could say worse things! ] i wonder how many readers (mostly men probably) wish they were the one coming to your door for dinner, dancing, and? oh yeah, DVDs. thanks for sharing. bri :)
Best cook who knows the favourite dishes to make me cheer and dance with you. The dish of your poetry is delicious and hygenic. it gives me a long life. Regards ever for the best cook of poetry. I have not made any bargaining paid in full.10 out of 10. Am i miser.Namaste! ! !
Best cook who knows the favourite dishes to make me cheer and dance with you. The dish of your poetry is delicious and hygenic. it gives me a long life. Regards ever for the best cook of poetry. Namaste! ! !
Romantic evenings, South American style. I an feel the lilt of the samba right through this poem. Hasta luego senora.
Nice. A delightful scene any man would love to be part of.