Thursday, November 5, 2015

Cooking A Morning Poem Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hemmed and wrecked my head
to remember and write out a recipe
to pen the perfect set of words - poetry
toasting each dawn - a tasty savory
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Seema Jayaraman
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 March 2016

From now on I resolve to love to love cooking.Cooking can be so humorously delicious, got it now.Thanks dear poet.

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Rajat Jain 10 November 2015

Awesome Seema! Your work inspires me to cook a morning poem :)

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Sanjukta Nag 08 November 2015

Cooking A Morning Poem - a very interesting title and the processing of cooking it is brilliantly narrated. Enjoyed thoroughly.

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Seema Jayaraman 08 November 2015

Thanks Sanjukta, glad you enjoyed.

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Wes Vogler 08 November 2015

Has a nice ring to it although I favour the rhyming poem a 10

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Seema Jayaraman 08 November 2015

Thanks Wes for visting and your comments, I do have a few rhyming ones too, inviting you to read them, some are meant to shock but most deal with nature and its creatures I observe around me..you most probably will like my musings Why Blame Me A Blood Moon, Dawns Aural littany, my baby and a spate of haikus I added recently. Thank you.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

Rightful phrases minced and diced in this wonderful cooking a morning poem. This is humorous and wisely drafted definitely with expressive emotion.10

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Seema Jayaraman 07 November 2015

Thank you Kumaramaniji.

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Loke Kok Yee 06 November 2015

good enough for me for the same thing goes for me thanks-10

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Seema Jayaraman 07 November 2015

Thank you Loke, glad you liked it.

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