Convincing, More Like Lying Comments

this is a story of many people and you told us about it we fully understand we fully see the scene oh yes we lie a lot to convince and we hurt so much when a love one leaves with our heart what more can i say this is one good poem where we see all the images you put one heartfelt poem everyone relates too you wrote it so good ten votes

oh my! this is exactly what people need to understand... i love this poem: -p i do: -p it's awesome! !

This is beautiful! I love the imagery! It's a sad thing, all the lies we tell ourselves, but it usually is to help. It's not that different from hope because what does hope do other than comfort us.

i thought i would never get over kevin fisher but i did and i found someone better

thought it was really good.......till I read bout cooking flesh? ?

Wow! kyle, this is a beautiful poem. so much meaning to it, so deep. Great stuff! !

a great poem, it stands out among others you have written. it is filled with hidden emotion.

fine composition indeed! ..........10+

really great poem, yes who is the inspiration? why so much pain Ky? i'm woried now ~Eva

Hmmm....interesting poem. And the inspiration is-? -Tyease