Thursday, April 16, 2009

Convinced Me She Is…. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is she an angel?
I asked the stars
They were dubious
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Nooruddeen Mathilakathveetil
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 24 December 2011

a candid love poem your biography?

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Anita Trivedi 19 May 2010

Very beautiful poem........ loved it

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 13 May 2010

wow this is a beauty of romance... that every lover faces... he wants her still feels that she is too far... to reach... great poem... loved it... very much.... really beautiful...

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Adalie Hettie 17 April 2010

Well I'm convinced..... Beautiful writing!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 April 2010

‘…But the winds snatched it and’ The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious’ Touchy...I’m dumbfounded amongst dubiousness’ Loved it… 10+ Ms. Nivedita Uk

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Lacey Jackson 31 March 2010

Once again, beautiful poem! ..Your gf better feel special(:

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Supriya Prathapan 28 March 2010

Very well written. Wonderful use of imagery.

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Marieta Maglas 18 October 2009

wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read......10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 October 2009

But the winds snatched it and The clouds then, if she heard my yelps, I am dubious….lovely poem andbeautiful words in it... yu r voice is notherd and lost inwind.. try to rachand convey she may beyopurs.....10 read minea................anywhere....buttrflies around...........beauty

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C. P. Sharma 15 August 2009

Superb poetry........transporting. Excellent craftsmanship. CP

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wonderful and sweet poem filled by that hot feling of love..enjoyed it much..

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Shashendra Amalshan 05 July 2009

well this is cool, breezy nice write indeed.. filled with emotions.. i liked it very much! ! ! with lv shan

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Amir Forougi 04 July 2009

Very heart throbbing one.U wrote exactly in my genre.The loss of the beloved and regret.Manipulated accurately.10

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Rommel Mark Marchan 03 July 2009

you stir up my emotion seem you are writing in front of me

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this is really awesome.very true and real

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Lynn Glover 14 June 2009

Nooruddeen, this is a classic, I like the questions asked in doubt and then answered in love. Great writing. Your friend Lynn

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*_sakura ~daisy_* 13 June 2009

i like it such..powerful opinion and makes me wonder so much keep writing my friend... :)

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Ency Bearis 04 June 2009

a lovely poem...well expressed in a way with that imaginative word play..great one...10

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Lady Grace 03 June 2009

your poem is beautiful.don't convince me anymore coz i know she loves you so..grace

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This poem is masterfully and imaginatively written in every way. She smiled, she was very beautiful, she was loquacious, but was she perceptive and empathetic? Thanks for a beautiful poem. 10 Karin Anderson

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