Thursday, October 6, 2016

Convinced Comments

Rating: 4.5

Did I ever know you?
I held your hand for years
and still I wonder,
was any of it real?
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Nika McGuin
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 October 2016

Possessing the gift of the 'Written Word', be it poetry, prose or short/long story book writing, can say a lot about a persons character...You have that gift... I am no Seer or Mind Reader...but that all said...I enjoyed your poem, and suffice to add that based on your storyline...You deserve better...Chin-Up and keep that pen pumping, young lady ~FjR-'16~

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