Saturday, August 20, 2005

Conviction Comments

Rating: 4.8

I shouldn't have ever opened the door
and invited you in,

we are so alike it's like we are some kin
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Lydia J. McFarland
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Max Reif 21 August 2005

I tell you, I'm a seasoned, 'weathered' poet and critiquer, I've commented on dozens or hundreds of poems here, often naively rhymed stanzas about love make me stop reading because the emotions have been expressed so often and, well, in literary terms, the language gets ridden with cliche's. But in this poem, I believe you! I mean a freshness comes through, for me, via your obvious sincerity.

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Lydia J. McFarland

Lydia J. McFarland

Orlando, Florida
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