Friday, July 17, 2009

Conversing With An Unborn Child Comments

Rating: 4.7

In the dream tonight, I talked with my unborn child
inside from my womb when he looked at me & smiled
my heart was filled with pleasure
the moment of bliss was beyond any measure
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Dave Tanwar
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Sam Edison 20 July 2009

This trully was beautiful, must be a wonderful experience. Poem made me happy great write 10/10

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Sayz LFlynn 18 July 2009

beautfully writen! 10++

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