Conversing Muse Comments

O ' birds of flight your secrets tell and if you know which of us had end up in heaven or? For isn't all is well that ends well. Lets pray there ain't 's murk but Eden's light at the end of the tunnel! ......touching expression with impressive theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks for shairing.

Very interesting.... we are bird lovers.

Aw this was delightful, the words just flow with great abandon like a summers day passing with youths submarine, beautiful imagination, thank you for sharing, this is a fav

You worked on rhyme most i think, and i guess u did it well.. :) and the meaning is awesome also_Soul

i love the imagination, it's speak a lot and yes, it's a great poem

nice imagination and creativity in this poem, , ,

Love this poem the repetition serves as time then it echoes... its paradoxically speaks of death but it has life it has a tone a rhythm a joy and some hope beautifully written keep writing :)

beautiful, deep, a joy to read

A superb allegory.Loved.............