Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Converse With Shepherd Dateless Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under dark ominous clouds...
Thoughts of mine rowing with Being Celestial
His Voice melodic, earnest... seemingly terrestrial:
Grieve we must grieve over hearts buried...
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Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.
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Frank P. Lester 20 May 2009

Poetry at its best! 'Fell in the grime for all was mine! ' - what a truthful line! Great and original imagery, again, a profoundly meaningful and powerful verse! Your poetic skills, styles of expression and wisdom are simply unique and remarkable! Dr. you are extraordinarily gifted and your work is always full of pleasant surprises! 10!

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Charles Carole 06 October 2008

Deeply moving and brilliant...A CALL for ALL to stop our foolishness and...Listen..Converse...Repent...Change...Put into Action..Listen...a cycle worth remembering. for it should be repeated every moment of our existence. Great truth, you've motivated me to get going & to do more ...Thanks CC

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Allison Freeman 28 September 2008

Of course, a 10+...promise to share with others. Allie

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Allison Freeman 28 September 2008

Outstanding poem! Love the imagery and its very clever delivery... important divine truths are stressed firmly and convincingly. Yes, grieve we must for all the lost moments we have not listened to the Divine Shepherd, who is always trying to reach everyone's heart and soul. Woe to us...forever...if we do not feed from the 'Hand of the Sacred Lamb'. Haunting thoughts for the 'sheep'...we thank you.

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Edward Farnsworth 25 September 2008

Dear Dr. Kardas, Messages of eternal importance, eloquently and cleverly stated in your poetic verse. Woe to ALL of US who do not 'converse' with the Shepherd and grieve over the mess we've made of this earth: The Creator's gifts... Lots to digest here... Thanks for another great 'brain stretcher'. Eddie

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Suyatha Kemm 24 September 2008

Of the greatest poetic quality. Very beautifully done verse with super important meaning. Woe to all of us who do not heed the warning! Too many people with ' wasteland in the brain land'...10+

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