Oh to converse with a page
Should you feel the need to set free rage
Not judged nor claimed, let's call it blank
You can tell it lies or you can speak your shame
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Hmm... I like the idea- and in fact I've had 'conversations with the page', as you so beautifully put it, but I think that you could've executed it better. No offense intended, but it seems repetitive and simple. If you expand upon it, maybe with a thesaurus in hand, I'll rate it a ten for sure!
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Hmm... I like the idea- and in fact I've had 'conversations with the page', as you so beautifully put it, but I think that you could've executed it better. No offense intended, but it seems repetitive and simple. If you expand upon it, maybe with a thesaurus in hand, I'll rate it a ten for sure!