Wednesday, March 14, 2012

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OK. Bobbi Kristina, so mummy is gone
And an ochre sky solemnly stares down at you
As a silent wind blows thru the pellucid curtains
of your mummy's house and stirs your memory.
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ENOCH JOHN
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Wahab Abdul 14 March 2012

Simplicity is the style and quality of your poem, the way you start and end the poem is praise worthy, you are really a talented one, your wording and the poetical diction is properly appropriate, the flow of the poem is like a gushing water, and blowing like a wind making a sound soothing to soul and storming the brain, and very musical to ears, I wish I had written this poem….the theme is original and the poem is well crafted and well composed poem those qualities made the poem a everlasting a piece of fine art…I like poem very much and I will also like you thoughtful on my poems, especially ‘’I want to die’’

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