When God created woman he was working late on the 6th day.......
An angel came by and asked.' Why spend so much time on her? '
The lord answered. 'Have you seen all the specifications I have to meet to shape her? '
She must function on all kinds of situations,
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Tears are her way of expressing her grief! ! Nice piece of work dedicated to women. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Wonderfully communicated woman worth and her strength to come through all odds and difficulties and to come out as the best possible creation of God.Very well done Randhir Kaur. Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Extremely powerful portrayal of a woman which makes her a beacon of light and a symbol of strength. The concluding lines portray her as the epitome of gracefulness 'She has just one drawback.... 'She often forgets what she is worth'. Thanks that you brought it to us.
I guess you did not went thru the poet's note.. Sunil this is a post I found on Facebook so I did not made any changes.. But I will certainly keep your words in my mind..will try so..thanks for reading...
Waoo I am so glad to hear that, May you and your family remain happy and blessed.. Thank you Kelly..I means a lot to me and my Teacher..
I have four daughters and I would like them to read this. Thanks, Randhir
Thank you Rahman Sir for your kind words.. Inspiring others is a very big thing..Feeling blessed. Soul in peace...
What a wonderful poems you are! I inspire with you. নারী সম্পর্কে জর্জ বার্নাড শ বলেছিলেন, মহানবী(সাঃ) নারীকে এমন মর্যাদা দিয়েছেন, যাতে জান্নাত নারীর পায়ের নিচে এসে গেল।
Thank you Barry. I will surely have a look on yours..Stay updated.
Very interesting poem. It reminded me of a haiku I wrote on a similar topic. It's on poemhunter under the title Four Haiku Woman Haiku a strange enigma the fearsome strength of woman her frail tenderness
To shape her! With the muse of Beauty and Love. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.
Thanks to my Teacher(Dorothy Momin) Sir. It means a lot to me...Stay connected. Keep reading.
Your spectacular poem defines woman in the most appropriate terms.....Woman is the creator of the human beings on this earth....she deserves respect, love and affection by everybody as her place is unique in the society....thank you so much for spreading this awareness...
I was mesmerized with the beauty of this lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.