Monday, June 20, 2016

Conversation On Woman.. Comments

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When God created woman he was working late on the 6th day.......
An angel came by and asked.' Why spend so much time on her? '
The lord answered. 'Have you seen all the specifications I have to meet to shape her? '
She must function on all kinds of situations,
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Randhir kaur
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Akhtar Jawad 11 April 2017

I was mesmerized with the beauty of this lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 September 2016

Tears are her way of expressing her grief! ! Nice piece of work dedicated to women. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Randhir Kaur 05 July 2016

Thank you Khalid Sir for your analysis.. Peace on earth...

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Wonderfully communicated woman worth and her strength to come through all odds and difficulties and to come out as the best possible creation of God.Very well done Randhir Kaur. Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Randhir Kaur 29 June 2016

Thank you Rajnish Sir for your time..keep reading..

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Rajnish Manga 26 June 2016

Extremely powerful portrayal of a woman which makes her a beacon of light and a symbol of strength. The concluding lines portray her as the epitome of gracefulness 'She has just one drawback.... 'She often forgets what she is worth'. Thanks that you brought it to us.

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Randhir Kaur 22 June 2016

I guess you did not went thru the poet's note.. Sunil this is a post I found on Facebook so I did not made any changes.. But I will certainly keep your words in my mind..will try so..thanks for reading...

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Randhir Kaur 22 June 2016

Waoo I am so glad to hear that, May you and your family remain happy and blessed.. Thank you Kelly..I means a lot to me and my Teacher..

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Kelly Kurt 22 June 2016

I have four daughters and I would like them to read this. Thanks, Randhir

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Randhir Kaur 21 June 2016

Thank you Rahman Sir for your kind words.. Inspiring others is a very big thing..Feeling blessed. Soul in peace...

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Md Anisur Rahman 21 June 2016

What a wonderful poems you are! I inspire with you. নারী সম্পর্কে জর্জ বার্নাড শ বলেছিলেন, মহানবী(সাঃ) নারীকে এমন মর্যাদা দিয়েছেন, যাতে জান্নাত নারীর পায়ের নিচে এসে গেল।

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Randhir Kaur 21 June 2016

My honour to do this Edward...Thanks for reading..

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Randhir Kaur 21 June 2016

Thank you Barry. I will surely have a look on yours..Stay updated.

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Barry Middleton 21 June 2016

Very interesting poem. It reminded me of a haiku I wrote on a similar topic. It's on poemhunter under the title Four Haiku Woman Haiku a strange enigma the fearsome strength of woman her frail tenderness

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 June 2016

To shape her! With the muse of Beauty and Love. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us.

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Randhir Kaur 20 June 2016

Thanks to my Teacher(Dorothy Momin) Sir. It means a lot to me...Stay connected. Keep reading.

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Kishore Kumar Das 20 June 2016

Your spectacular poem defines woman in the most appropriate terms.....Woman is the creator of the human beings on this earth....she deserves respect, love and affection by everybody as her place is unique in the society....thank you so much for spreading this awareness...

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Randhir Kaur 20 June 2016

You are right.Thank you Nosheen for your words.

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