And when the sun
talks to sky…saying
“Sky, will you please grant my wish? ”
send me the warmth of her love
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Ho, such a romantic Idea brings the big to my nail-top! Beautiful.....Beautiful. Feel the sun like me also. You have done...what I can't express.....but done it. Cosmic world is no more alien from my inner world. A tie you have weaved by the words. I have not read before such a poem playing with so vast and living canvass where heavenly objects are like me and my surroundings. In truest sense you have personify the sun and sky like the lovers of our known society. Perfect synchronization of lunar eclipse. Give us more poet.....give us more...... Regards, 10++++++ Apoet Bangla
'Celestial romance By terrestrial In note ethereal’ ~ niv Poet Lady Ma’am I’m eclipsed in your separate format of lolol… Thanks for sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Cosmic conversation...A wonderful little poem indeed! ; D
lol what a conversation...gd poem, like it