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A hungering for life remains
but I'm no ripe and juicy peach,
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Jim Hogg 13 July 2019

Darcy. Hi. Thank you so much for your very generous words. Your ref to the last line is well taken. I feel like the sorcerer's apprentice at the moment. I keep finding issues that need addressing with the result that it's grown from 145 to 200 verses! ! The plan is fairly humble: to make it coherent " enough" before the repair process becomes destructive! ! Again, very much thanks for looking in and for such thoughtful comments..

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Darcy 11 July 2019

So many many things to say about this beautiful composite of musings and thoughts about things you’ve written about over the years, and some you have not (or maybe it's just that I have not seen them before) in a chronology that makes this the connecting work that I think will survive. I loved every line and especially, the last : -)

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Darcy 10 July 2019

I laugh and cry and laugh again. All so true and said so well. I wouldn’t mind the lack of hair ..

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