In the beginning of your poem I was reading words, as I kept going the rhythm picked up considerably and I felt them grip me from within, becoming more and more intense and vividly open, passion building. By the end I was burning with an inner intensity, wanting it to be explained to me also, why this conventionality? Superb writing, just love it! 10+++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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In the beginning of your poem I was reading words, as I kept going the rhythm picked up considerably and I felt them grip me from within, becoming more and more intense and vividly open, passion building. By the end I was burning with an inner intensity, wanting it to be explained to me also, why this conventionality? Superb writing, just love it! 10+++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn