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The pleasurable cup brims.
Oh! Just sips around its rims.
Leaping flames reek consumption.
The plundered soul seeks redemption.
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wonderfullllllllllllllll dear friend..you write so beautiful poem..i love it
Some clever working here Saadat of the complexities and tragedy of life. Nicely expressed. Not over elaborate. Just hint enought to give us a handle on the themes. jim (PS Sonsieneb is a section of cliff in the Clanyard Bay, SW Scotland, that gulls nest on and anglers fish from. Access to and from is a bit precarious at times. Gulls eggs are very nutritious with as salty a taste as you'd expect from scavengers of the sea.. Thanks for reading... and hey, there's no need to ever leave comments Saadat - I'm just a lowly scribbler... save your time for the good writers.. appreciated. jim)
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wowwwwwwww so beautiful what resided in the niches of my heart? -10 anjali
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7/29/2025 4:46:58 PM # 1.0.0
It is an intense and eloquent verse. 'Plundered soul'....'soul ripped in commotion' and 'spiked sonata' all are vivid images that enhance the imposing theme of a suffering soul.