Saturday, June 6, 2009

Controlled Temptations Comments

Rating: 4.7

You come near, and I want you so very close
You have given me life, in a packaged mega-dose
I want to pull you up close to me hard
My mind and memory have been blessed, but scarred
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Deborah Cromer
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Bob Blackwell 22 August 2009

Your phrasing is superb in this poem of controlled passion, it made me recall the urgency of first love in youth.

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Nikunj Sharma 13 July 2009

At times I wonder if there could be a poetess as good as thee the one who put in poems, all the heart and pain no matter what she writes about, sunshine or rain let me pray for you and your hand your poetic world as grand as god's kingdom your poems breeding freedom

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Deborah Cromer

Deborah Cromer

Portland, Oregon
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