Saturday, May 30, 2015

Control Freak Comments

Rating: 4.5

She yells and screams
With anger in her heart
She keeps it mean
While tearing you apart
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Scotty Ceurvels
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Very powerful piece! I loved it and had to read it twice :)

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Scotty Ceurvels 01 June 2015

Thanks Margarita! ! ! Glad you liked it.

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Chinedu Dike 31 May 2015

An insightfully piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and subtly penned with conviction. Indeed, a control freak destabilizes ones emotional, spiritual, social... wellbeing. An ugly person to be with. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Scotty Ceurvels 31 May 2015

Thank you for the kind words. It's easy to write when you lived it. Lol

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Ayman Parray 30 May 2015

A very well written piece, Scotty. Thanks for sharing. If you have the time please review my 'Valhalla', it is about worthy warriors like you.

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Scotty Ceurvels 31 May 2015

I appreciate the kind words Ayman. Keeps me wanting to write more.

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Kelly Kurt 30 May 2015

A powerful story, Scotty. Thanks for sharing. I wish you well

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Scotty Ceurvels 31 May 2015

Thank you Kelly! Much appreciated! ! !

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