Friday, October 5, 2012

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Rating: 5.0

Cold, in a warm in embrace
Feels Like he's fallen from grace
Asking why does this happen to us
Suddenly they give into the lust.
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Peyton Webb
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Maryelle Anthony 06 October 2012

This poem is well written and so rhythmic, truly amazing.

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Romeo Della Valle 05 October 2012

Excellent! This well penned write with a nice flow clearly shows your talent! Short but deep and thought provoking! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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