Monday, December 14, 2020

Control Comments

Rating: 5.0

Control
Takes Hold
In Many Forms
It powers our minds
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Lyn Paul
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Kesav Easwaran 20 December 2020

A good poem piece. Provides an emphatic message.5*

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 December 2020

A wonderful and powerful poem Imbued with wisdom and insight. Perceptive lines that take us to the realm of control with a meaningful message. Very inspiring. Five Stars and to my Poem List.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 December 2020

A very important life lesson is the one that your lovely poem evokes. Self-possession prevents others possessing you.

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Shaun Cronick 15 December 2020

To take control of one's life is to seize the initiative and move away from society's ill's burdens and constant demands. It pays to simply simplify. To one day wake up with a crystal clear game plan and adhere to it, for good and life. Thank you for sharing your uplifting and positive poem. Five stars and most deserving. Take care Lyn Paul and also Merry Christmas!

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David Wood 15 December 2020

How right you are, we have pressure thrust upon us from all directions, some we have no choice over, others we can choose. A good poem of the here and now.

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