Contrasting Reality Comments

A beautiful poem indeed..enjoyed while reading

Wow sounds amazing really it does...I find it intreging...really do

nice poem, the words flow beautifully i invite u read mine n comment.. thankz

Thank you for drawing my attantion to this fine poem which is vivid, moving and also educational! ! Good luck, John.

Authentic Indian scenes as seen in Indian films displayed adroitly in this nice piece of poem.congrats

Wow. Reverant yet terriffying. Very good use of imagry

nicely penned.the vision of a city.marvelous and terrific. tnx for invitation

Good Poem that brought the image to be seen by the reader

Good write, enjoyed it, do keep going!

A beautiful poem well describing the contrasting reality of the Divine City Varanasi.The imagery is brought out before ones eyes. Thanks for sharing.Best wishes. Chandra Thiagarajan

NICE=)) .. I HOPE YOU'LL ALSO READ MY POEMS.. =') BE BLESS..

great, but read my poems tooooo!

Wonderful that you expose part of the deep culture in your poetry! Very explicit rendition!

Great poem, I like it.

Wow! Nice writer up dear...i will like to be your friend

very consuming..couldnt stop reading..

Simple yet captivating! ! A beautiful piece,

good write. reading it gives an insight to auspicious Varanasi, even though i've never bee there.

Great imaginery....i like it..kinda suits me

Sincerely, this is nice, very well written.